This is the first in a short series of comic strips that I sent to a couple of magazines before deciding the six-frame format was perhaps too unweildy and difficult for an editor to slip into an already existing layout. I guessed that the more normal three-frame format would be an easier sell. It's a shame, because the idea is quite sound, and would be easy to continue into a wide range of subject. And I admit I like this wordy kind of humour.
The story I based this strip on is here: